There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everwhere nowadays?
Various styles of music exist in the world nowadays. While music plays a vital role in creating a cultural identity and a sense of belonging for the society and the world, I believe that traditional music on the other hand, would speak of its variety and fashion rather than international music which is more popular.
Music plays a major capacity in finding imagination of the lost nature. Additionally, music can stimulate our creativity and be a source of inspiration. Affecting the mood and behaviour of the society, free of stress and anxiety is found to be the exact reason for the existence of melodies. For example, I am an example of myself. I would always play the piano whenever I feel down, listening to the melody would take me to a whole different universe. As a result, people would find relief from pain and worry through music, making a positive impact to the world full of an entire nation.
Concepts of lyric language include traditional and international forms. Globally recognised music would strengthen our feelings of belonging to a world-wide community, whereas stimulate our curiosity to discover other cultures. However, country-born styles take a different path. Traditional music expresses a nation's cultural heritage, giving its spirit and messages to be passed on for years. In Sri Lanka, for instance, night-time TV programs are still commited towards the ancient artists who brought out meaningful music to our lives, making the future generations believe the magic of old fashioned music. Going forward, this would strengthen national unity and will always trancend down its path of being played more.
In conclusion, styles and melodies bring aesthetic cure to our mind and soul, freeing ourselves with the problems we face on a daily basis. Traditional melodies are extremely versatile so they should be preserved at all costs, accepting our terms of culture and artistic value.
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- There are many different types of music in the world today Why do we need music Is traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everwhere nowadays 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...s of music exist in the world nowadays. while music plays a vital role in creating a ...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...erent path. Traditional music expresses a nations cultural heritage, giving its spirit an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17363344051 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7700325455 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5315086086 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268276344111 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866024593008 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725978013275 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170614688948 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105657491858 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.