In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Unfortunately, there is a massive discrepancy among progenitors and their infants in few nations nowadays, which is a practical matter of content, with numerous pros and cons associated from various perspectives. The upcoming article discusses both benefits and drawbacks; previously, I formulate my final verdict.
Firstly, the primary advantages of divergence among forerunners and their kids can be seen as a standardised living style. In other words, progenitors who give time to build their careers before family planning after marriage and give birth to their child after getting well settled subsequently provide a high standard of care to their younger ones; however, those forerunners who focus on family planning before their career cannot give a proper take care of their babies, indeed. For instance, a survey conducted by "Timeline News" proved that people who have a meagre difference in their marriage and the age of their adolescents were not able to take proper care of their toddlers. Hence, a significant period difference between elders and their kids will benefit their children's wealthy lifestyle.
Nevertheless, despite having discussed the pros of a gap in the age of parents and their infants, few drawbacks are apparent, and the most common one would be considered as a misunderstanding. Specifically, a new generation born child will go forth of upcoming trending assets that are easy to handle, and smartphone can be one of those. For example, various brands have launched their smartphone in the market like Apple and Samsung, whose prices are skyrocketing, and when toddlers demand such expensive items from their family; the family refuse to buy those items for them consequently, it might lead to a conflict that would appear as a family dispute. Thus, a lot of life variation will have a lot of discrepancies which can cause harmful relationship effects on a family.
Lastly, after discussing the benefits and drawbacks of this trend, I think that maturity variation is essential for progenitors and adolescents to give luxurious life to their infants, but in the cases of massive discrepancy of age between them could lead to a family conflict. Therefore, the period gap between children and parents should be there but up to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2967032967 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98286374986 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552197802198 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7428325479 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880497593063 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437181893781 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511680813678 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641004845783 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660928361455 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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