Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
There is not an iota of doubt that due to the world becoming globalised, majority of individuals are of opinion that in this contemporary epoch a person have ample amount of opportunities in each sectors. I strongly agree with the notion as, areas like: education, technology, society and many other are developed in a way where one can optain various choices in their life .
To embark with, there are number of scopes a person can choose in their career. Out of all enlisted reasons of why there are more choices in today’s period is that, due to the advancement of technology, people can stay in touch with their long distanced relations which is a convenient way of greeting closure with friends and family members though they are staying miles away.
Another variable aspects is getting best learning experience by enrolling to foreign universities . Simultaneously, student today, have free access to e-books where one can refer to many resources at anytime as it is convenient way of learning. Also, being in a comfort zone as mobile phones and laptops are handy and can carry anywhere.
Furthermore, the impact of social media has influenced many individuals in a positive manner. As a result, one can be entrepreneur and advertise their products and share it with internet community where a lot of people will able to know and purchase the things from business person which is a way of eating in this modern era just at their door step. Hence, such kind of globalisation was not there in past years and so, people today have many choices to pick from.
In conclusion, it can be inferred from the above discussion that, world is being dominated with countless opportunities for individuals in a field of technology and education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...unt of opportunities in each sectors. I strongly aree with the notion as, areas like: educati...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...can optain various choices in their life . To embark with, there are number of ...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...riable aspects is getting best learning experience by enrolling to foreign universities as...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...l media has influenced many individuals in a positive manner. As a result, one can be entrepreneur a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86195286195 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75211978772 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0922479949 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.444444444 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934510640051 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442209829014 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437061275831 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501942681121 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355071927577 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.