Everything in life comes with a cost it may not be in terms of money but in the sense of struggle and hardwork. Nowadays , stardom and a lavish lifestyle can be the dream of many person but it result in loose of privacy as stars always under a constant eye on media . Some people beleive that celebrities do not have raised voice against media but i do not agree with the given notion and will discuss in upcoming paragraph before drawing any reasonable conclusion.
To commence with , there are myriads of reasons why superstars do not want to share their personal life to everyone .First and foremost , celebrities are also human like other citizens . They also have personal life , friends and loved ones ,they have right to spend their time privately .To cite an example , whenever some celebrities are spotted on public places with their friends etcetera then media spread rumours against them . Moreover , we live in a country ,where all have right to complain against their grievances then why should the stars be exception to it
Coming to remaining points , celebrities have personal and professional life ,also they have sad and happy moments in their life, they donot want interference of anyone's but when media interfere in their life so some time it have negative impact on their career
In conclusion , all people have their own life either it is celebrity or a common people. When media or someone else check into their life they feel that loose their privacy or some of them took a wrong steps
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...sense of struggle and hardwork. Nowadays , stardom and a lavish lifestyle can be t...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
... a lavish lifestyle can be the dream of many person but it result in loose of privacy as st...
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Message: Did you mean 'results'?
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... can be the dream of many person but it result in loose of privacy as stars always und...
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...ars always under a constant eye on media . Some people beleive that celebrities do...
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...not have raised voice against media but i do not agree with the given notion and...
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... media but i do not agree with the given notion and will discuss in upcoming para...
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...sonable conclusion. To commence with , there are myriads of reasons why supers...
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...to share their personal life to everyone .First and foremost , celebrities are al...
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... share their personal life to everyone .First and foremost , celebrities are also hu...
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...al life to everyone .First and foremost , celebrities are also human like other c...
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...ities are also human like other citizens . They also have personal life , friends ...
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... citizens . They also have personal life , friends and loved ones ,they have right...
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...e personal life , friends and loved ones ,they have right to spend their time priv...
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...have right to spend their time privately .To cite an example , whenever some cele...
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...ve right to spend their time privately .To cite an example , whenever some celebr...
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...t to spend their time privately .To cite an example , whenever some celebrities a...
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...heir time privately .To cite an example , whenever some celebrities are spotted ...
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... example , whenever some celebrities are spotted on public places with their frie...
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...a then media spread rumours against them . Moreover , we live in a country ,where ...
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...a spread rumours against them . Moreover , we live in a country ,where all have ri...
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...t them . Moreover , we live in a country ,where all have right to complain against...
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... why should the stars be exception to it Coming to remaining points , celebrities...
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...ption to it Coming to remaining points , celebrities have personal and professio...
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...ties have personal and professional life ,also they have sad and happy moments in ...
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...y moments in their life, they donot want interference of anyones but when media ...
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...r life, they donot want interference of anyones but when media interfere in thei...
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...interfere in their life so some time it have negative impact on their career In ...
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... it have negative impact on their career In conclusion , all people have their ow...
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...impact on their career In conclusion , all people have their own life either i...
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...it is celebrity or a common people. When media or someone else check into their ...
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...mmon people. When media or someone else check into their life they feel that loo...
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Line 6, column 157, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
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Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81467181467 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44169598572 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.884857006 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.142857143 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328364074339 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144465792265 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865893054812 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210085137484 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389777715701 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.