The given line graph depicts the propotion of many sport activities have been participated in by youngsters in the South West of England between 1975 and the present day.
Overall, it is obvious that while swimming has become most popular, the opposite is true for biking/roller skating over the period.
As can be seen from the graph, in the year 1975, the percentage of young people playing ball games was the highest, at more than a third. The figure for biking/roller skating and swimming was lower, at 25% and 15% respectively, and the proportion of young people jogging/running was lowest, at less than 10%. There was a steady rise in the proportion of youngsters swimming from 1980 to 2000, and then it has risen sharply to about 35% in present day. The proportion of running participants fluctuated from 1975 to 2000, and then it has experienced its upward trend until present day, to 15%.
Additionally, the percentage of young people participating in different outdoor activities has witnessed a downward trend for ball games and biking/roller skating over the period. By present day, the figure for balling is higher than that for biking/roller skating, at 20% and 15% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rticipants fluctuated from 1975 to 2000, and then it has experienced its upward t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08585858586 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97714742585 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1541958013 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.875 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17995804135 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872648933007 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540955342694 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106692026318 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667415177463 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.