When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are various elements for people when considering a job. I strongly believe that high payment is a necessary thing when you apply for an occupation.
There are several reasons why it might be argued that a high salary is important. Firstly, a high income is essential for people to meet basic needs. Getting a well-paid job, they can cover simple living expenses such as food, accommodation and bills. An underpaid job cannot pay for the more and more expensive living costs in big cities. Secondly, a high salary will help people ensure a more decent life. For example, children and family members can receive better healthcare service and education. This improves the quality of their life. People also can fulfill their hobbies or interests thanks to the high salary.
Many people argue that if you choose a job just for the money, you will quickly feel stressed and lose your passion. Some recent surveys show that 20% of employees quit their jobs after 1 month of working because of lack of motivation. However, I have generally found that money partly creates job satisfaction. When people earn more money, they will feel more pleased with their job. For instance, doctors or bankers suffer a lot of pressure so their salary is always higher compared to others.
In conclusion, it depends on each person to choose job satisfaction or high salary when he applies for a job. In my opinion, the salary should be a vital factor when you choose your job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46105979584 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1580262119 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198423092799 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07005486692 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718535458477 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156913760169 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089604772007 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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