Take a look at the graphic and complete the task The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should spe

The diagram illustrates the marriage age at the first marriage and family size of nine different countries.

Overall, it is clear that the citizens in Kenya have the youngest marriage age(20) while the figure for family size in this country is the biggest. Moreover, Denmark has the oldest marriage age (33) of the nine countries and the number of children per Chinese woman is the smallest.

According to the chart, women in Kenya often get married at 22, followed by India, China and Brazil with the figure at 24, 25 and 27 respectively. American women have their first marriage at the age of 28 while the figure for Australia is 29. Netherlands and UK both record a figure of 32 compared to the number of 33 in Denmark.

In Kenya, each family has more than 3 children. The figures for the children per Indian and American women are about 2.5. The other six countries have the figure for family size hovering around 1.5 to 2 with the smallest number of China reaching 1.5 children per family.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e figure for family size hovering around 1.5 to 2 with the smallest number of Chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70454545455 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4211746688 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.171733496 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10918568787 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535331662108 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245369285577 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761837474672 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00824179439759 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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