Big salary us much more important than job satisfaction.Do you agree or disagree? provide relevant examples if necessery.
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with a high even if it is not a satisfying one. I completely disagree with the opinion and think that self-satisfaction is much more indispensable rather than high pay scale jobs.
First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee. If the job is more stressful or difficult to manage, they will tend to leave the occupation, even if it has a high salary. Moreover, that will lead them to seek new occupation which compromises their area of interest.For instance, most researchers or scientists are doing their jobs only because of their passion towards the job, so they are not focusing on higher wages.Therefore,happiness while doing a job is essential rather than high wage.
Secondly, the satisfaction in their job is indispensable for not only their career growth, but also for their excellent productivity while comparing with wages. If people get the opportunity to work according to their likeness, their efficiency will be gradually boosted. Additionally, because of their satisfaction while doing their job, they will be more productive even if the salary is less. For example, The Hindu Newspaper reports that 60% of the skilled workers over the world still working under minimum wages,but they are not willing to change their career for better wage,because they are well satisfied in their current profession. So, self-satisfaction has a significant role in maintaining jobs and also enriches their productivity.
To conclude, job satisfaction is highly beneficial than high wage because it makes people enhance their happiness and productiveness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24542124542 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21916132521 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5117174555 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165693945218 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083054783292 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547261072758 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124755521709 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380637800146 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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