Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modernized and developed world, machine takes the place of the human power and the most important part of the job is just education and skill which is same in between both of the genre. Even though some people believe women or mens are not good on a specific filed, other disagree with them. I also completely disagree with the view-point of the making difference between to genre. my reasons are as the following.
Nowadays, machines take the place of the human on most of the jobs. The only important thing which qualified a person for a job is it skill and knowledge. By each passing day we see a new sort of machines which you just need to know how to use it.
Secondly, considering the physical and mental difference between both genre, each have some advantage and disadvantage to each other. Indeed they can complete each other even on a simple work.
The only difference between the women and men are the sentence that they hear each day. I believe women like men are able to do everything as long as she believer herself. For example, as a woman civil engineer I passed through this cliche, that women are now suitable for engineering. When I want to make major selection most of my family members encouraged me to select architecture. However, I liked civil engineering most. Thanks for my father who supports me on my decision. he support me and helped me to work in the field that I want.
taking the aforementioned reasons and examples, the only thing that creates difference between men ans women is the beliefs that we have about ourselfs. we all see too many men who cook wonderful and many women is very succesful in engineering. they only important thing is the hardworking, interest. In other word, each person has to evaluate is abilities. As I believe we always can find a way to do the thing the we love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60497731781 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518292682927 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5640948845 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2380952381 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2380952381 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246708731973 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616396658132 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688346022589 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118268596036 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437457012531 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.