Family-(1)
Q: Some people think teachers have a greater influence than parents in the development of a child’s intelligence and social skills. Do you agree or disagree?
I strongly disagree with the view that teachers have a greater influence on the development of a child’s intelligence and social skills, comparing with that of parents. In fact, the more time parents spent with children, the more intimate relationship built between parents and children, which are essential to the development of children’s intelligence and social skills.
Admittedly, teachers play an irreplaceable role in children’s development. Through intensive classes, teachers impart substantial up-to-date knowledge into children. No matter how knowledgeable parents are, they are...
- Family-(1)Q: Some people think teachers have a greater influence than parents in the development of a child’s intelligence and social skills. Do you agree or disagree? 80
- Q: In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society? 80
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. what could be the reasons for this ? Do u think it is a positive or a negative development? 88
- Q: Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Other believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 93
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No. of Words: 369 while No. of Different Words: 166
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1964 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.322 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.92 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.58 0.50
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