The pie charts show the amount of leisure time spent on devices in Vietnam since the quarantine period began in April.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagrams provide the data of percentages of how Vietnamese spent time on devices since the lockdown began in April.
Overall, it can be seen that the time inhabitants spent on games was always the highest, while these residents spent less time on news.
Taking closer with the phone, it is easy to see that games have been the most famous in Vietnam which accounts for one out of three, meanwhile, people did not interested in news therefore it has decreased constantly with 3%. Moreover, social networking and utilities are also the favourite activities of individuals which is 29% and 20% respectively
On the other hand, laptops and tablets have been spent a lot of time on games which constitute over half the pie chart at 57%. However, the news remain unchanged and it dramatic decline in the utilities because they have just taken time with the figure at 4%. And they also spent less time on music and videos, it just take 13%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-08-24 | bicaaaaaaya | 89 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...out of three, meanwhile, people did not interested in news therefore it has decreased cons...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 57%. However, the news remain unchanged and it dramatic decline in the utilities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73780487805 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44495468073 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1385161547 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.23603664747 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156273407972 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832044511479 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530174078946 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104203534823 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625445414556 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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