Nowadays it is common for people to get married in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
In contemporary settings, individuals become more advanced and modern. Therefore, they prefer to become married in their thirties as compared to in their young decades. I completely agree with this nation because this trend provides huge proportion of benefits to society which are explained in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, most of the individuals prefer to get married in their thirties and therefore there are plethora of reasons behind this criteria. The first and foremost reason is to become independent and settled in their preferable career job. Because, in present duration, every individual get quality education in which they learn about every section of society and their advancements. Due to which, they promote themselves to become independent rather then to depend on their parents. By followed this criteria, they get their desirable jobs in every sector such as business, foreign trades or so on through which they recieve their handsome salaries. As a result, this leads to proliferate towards employment which shows positive picture if progression in the economy of a nation.
Furthermore, if individuals got married in their thirties, thus they also become aware from family plannings. In this criteria, the major issue concern towards control of birth rate. Because, in young age, individuals do not aware from the criticism which comes in front due to inclination of birth rates. However, if they get married in their mid thirties thus they promote to utilise birth control measures and become aware from well family plans. Due to this, they become beneficial to the society because via these measures they become viable to balance the proportion of population. As a result, if the population rate is maintained thus this shows positive impact for society because this leads to proliferate towards superior services due to less number of residents and consumed less spaces which declined the crowd to.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that masses prefer their decision towards marriage in their thirties. Therefore, they show more focus in their career lines which becomes impressive to development of nation and awareness of birth control measures and we'll family plannings so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36571428571 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73259389368 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502857142857 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1698814681 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255676835942 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926892002713 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564827895784 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170531674546 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580714779233 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.