Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are various research and studies going on in the field of scientific research, business and last but no the least educational field. Many people are of the view that sharing of information is very vital and advantageous whereas another group oppose the idea as they deem the information to be too valuable and secretive. I shall discuss both perscpectives in detail before sharing my own conclusive verdict.
To begin with, as the world is expanding and knowledge has emerged to be the most powerful tool. It is imparetive to share the information that is beneficial to many. For instance, if one country has spent millions of dollars on a certain research; it is their obligation to share the research analysis with the rest of the world in order to save the expenses of other countries that might be starting the same scope of research. Similarly, many underdeveloped countries do not have the resources to initiate a research but they are enriched with natural resources. The information can work as trade tool with those countries. Thus, dissemination of useful information rightfully benefit the needy.
On the contrary, people think that not all of the information is supposed to be shared accros the world. Some informations are of sensitive nature and can create a chaos rather giving benefits. For instance, atomic energy related strategies cannot be disseminated openly as they put the relevant country to an open threat. Likewise, information regarding economic growth of a certain country cannot be shared freely.
To recapitulate the aforementioned, the information is a powerful tool to bring development accross the globe so sharing of information should be encourage. On the other hand, some information are to be kept secretive in order to safeguard country's defense system and economic stability. In my opinion, the importance of knowledge sharing cannot be overlooked and it should be widely appreciated but some information is meant to be kept hidden as it may reciprocate negatively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...entific research, business and last but no the least educational field. Many peopl...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... On the contrary, people think that not all of the information is supposed to be shared ac...
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Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...obe so sharing of information should be encourage. On the other hand, some information ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, may, regarding, similarly, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20923076923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05319466021 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547692307692 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1068613524 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383230158668 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124849846456 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683690133118 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235044523627 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458068702015 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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