People's interference in the natural system and deforestation for personal interest badly impact the environment in different regions of the world. Although it is a never-ranking issue for government and communities. In this essay, we are going to elaborate on the solution to this issue.
Admittedly, first and foremost, human perspective, logging companies worked to fulfill the necessity of inhabitants. Due to that trees vanish from the earth fastly. Furthermore, companies process the trees and have been making some items papers, boards, doors, and furniture. Besides, think about pollution and destroying the environment. In addition, we should promote artificial wood for manufacturing products because it saves the trees and the atmosphere prevent from pollution. For instance, In America companies have been using artificial wood for making different items of human usage and saving the society to become more polluted.
confessedly, Some countries legalization about logging. They bound companies in a specific area rather than they work anywhere in the country. It is a fact that these types of rules preserve the trees and species which are essential for a healthy atmosphere. For example, In Iran, felling trees are restricted in some areas without essential permission. So as we saw in news last year some culprits were caught and sent to prison. After taking these actions Iran community were feeling afraid of doing illegal activity. This shows that the government has been successful in maintaining a healthy environment.
To conclude, It is a major responsibility of humans and the government to make sure that use of artificial wood instead of original and implement rules to stop duliteing the environment. It is important for us and our next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Confessedly
...g the society to become more polluted. confessedly, Some countries legalization about logg...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ecome more polluted. confessedly, Some countries legalization about logging. They bound ...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ulprits were caught and sent to prison. After taking these actions Iran community wer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43321299639 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0271441603 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7358895058 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6111111111 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999617629495 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301911879511 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023671319057 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628037015022 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320222897216 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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