The table illustrates information on coffee shop sales in an office building on days of the week.
By looking at the table, the popular beverages are coffee in comparison with tea. Pastries are fit with the taste of people of the office building in the morning, and also sandwiches are ordered in near the noon in compare with other time of day.
Beverages that serve in the coffee shop are coffee and tea, and people of the building prefer coffee to tea. For both of them, morning is the best time to serve in the consumer's view. Although the coffee is rough to popular in the most rest of day's hour, tea order experiences a dramatic decline in order after morning.
Foods are available in two choices too, sandwiches and pastries. the sandwiches are first rank order from 10:30 until 14:30. however, pastries are so popular in the morning, and also from 14:30 until 17:30. In other hours they are ordered but a number is not compared with these spans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...o choices too, sandwiches and pastries. the sandwiches are first rank order from 10...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...irst rank order from 10:30 until 14:30. however, pastries are so popular in the morning...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62941176471 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30471909434 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.472051093 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183381899097 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810097957844 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135238638984 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164614682703 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166783903452 0.0819641961636 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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