You are looking for a part-time job.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain what sort of job you would like
- and say what experience and skills you have
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
My name is Luca and I am 21 years old. I am a currently studying Machine tool operation at Giuseppe Zanardelli school in London.
I am looking for a part time Job and I hope you will be able to help me. I would like to work as a machine tool operator since I have been studying it for about 4 years. As you can see from my resume, I have worked in mechanical area during my trainee period for the past 3 year in several well known firm as well as Sturla e Frusca Srl and Cierre Meccanica. However, If there is no position available in my Field, any other occupation according to my res...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 201 200
No. of Characters: 865 1000
No. of Different Words: 133 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.303 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.643 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.242 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.267 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.667 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4