Lack of respect is one of the key signs that there could be an anti social behaviour involved. Growing up I was raised in a middle class family where I was taught to greet elders with smile and ask for their blessings. I developed a sense of strong empathy during early stages of life understanding the realtions and honouring them gave me a great sense of inclusivity and also provided strong ethic for me to live my life. Expectations were set properly and I honoured them, thoughts of being anti social never crept in. Human-race should feel proud about the advancement or consider it a disgrace for the technological innovations is up for a debate as now the cultural inclusivity barriers are broken and world is a open place. Anything we feel like doing whether it's a service or product we wish to have, is delivered to us in a flash. The close bond between the cultural aspects are now broken and has effected the whole generation circulating bad vibes about life and expectations. Therefore, people belief about anti social behaviour is partially true, there are similar incidents in the neighbourhood that stand as an anecdote example to prove this point
- Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader it is not as important as a leader s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers 50
- Claim The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals 75
- Two years ago radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call in advice programs that it broadcast since that time its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly Given WCQP s recent succe 57
- Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti social behaviour and lack of respect for others What might have caused this situarion How to improve it 56
- A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting lethargy and other signs of illness After the recall the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food an 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 718, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sivity barriers are broken and world is a open place. Anything we feel like doing...
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Line 1, column 768, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ce. Anything we feel like doing whether its a service or product we wish to have, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78606965174 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78214008595 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3731988099 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153944350954 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648897632117 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629588258416 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153944350954 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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