Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors.
I strongly believe that the pros far outweigh the cons, and will examine both below.
In the present era, it has become very common for students to go abroad for their higher education mainly due to the widespread opportunities and easy accessibility. Although education overseas has a few cons, they are outweighed by the pros of the same.
One of the major advantages of studying overseas is the plethora of opportunities that comes as a bonus along with it, irrespective of the field of study. Not only is the potential of acquiring important skills and gaining unique work experience very high, the probability of getting employed also increases tenfold, while studying abroad. In addition, living alone in a completely unknown country away from the comfort of the home, is very crucial for a student as it plays a key role in the process of becoming independent. It makes the person capable of fulfilling his/her own needs, while also making him/her deft in the skill of managing his/her finances. Living in a new nation not only allows a tutee to learn about various new cultures , but also makes him/her open minded which permits the individual to have a broader perspective of the things around him/her. A degree from a first world country like the United States or Britain has a certain reputation which precedes them, that makes it’s holder seen in very high regard and given more importance compared to one not having the same.
On the other hand, however there are some disadvantages to studying in a new country, the major one being feeling homesick. It might not be that easy for a number of individuals to adjust instantaneously to their new environment. Moreover, the language and the way of the people around them may not be anywhere close to that of their home country and instead may be completely alien. For many, it might be the first time that they actually stepped away from the supervision of their parents so there might be a very high chance of such people losing the discipline which they previously had in their lives and it might result in them entering a world of debauchery. But still, the number of pros are much more in number as compared to the cons and consequentially, the former outweighs the latter.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 2, column 843, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...vidual to have a broader perspective of the things around him/her. A degree from a first world countr...
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Line 2, column 997, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...utation which precedes them, that makes it’s holder seen in very high regard and giv...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
.... Moreover, the language and the way of the people around them may not be anywhere close to that of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, may, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82432432432 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73996079427 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9201718902 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.307692308 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155798928081 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628831540275 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050225744933 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109905371624 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392588416843 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...utee to learn about various new cultures , but also makes him/her open minded whic...
^^
Line 2, column 843, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...vidual to have a broader perspective of the things around him/her. A degree from a first world countr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 997, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...utation which precedes them, that makes it’s holder seen in very high regard and giv...
^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
.... Moreover, the language and the way of the people around them may not be anywhere close to that of th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, may, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82432432432 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73996079427 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9201718902 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.307692308 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155798928081 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628831540275 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050225744933 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109905371624 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392588416843 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.