The contemporary era is the era of industrialisation and industries have become integral part of development and growth of economy. It is often argued by some individuals that growth in industrial sector is essential to curb poverty but opponents are of the view that industries should be banned as industrial development is deteriorating environmental quality.
To commence with, industries have become an essential component as it helps in thriving the economy of the country. Industries have provided umpteen benefits to the people as it has employed majority of people. Many people are earning their day to day salary and helping their family just because of the industries. Moroever, factories and industries have made daily life unwrinkled and comfortable by production of innumerble goods. For instance- Reliance limited has employed 50000 workers last year on full time basis that has helped to ameliorate the problem of destitution.
Many people have strong viewpoint that industries have contributed a lot in surging the level of pollution. Additionally, this development has led to many detrimental repercussions and health issues such as lung cancer, breathing problems, asthma are destroying life of innocent people. Moreover, the air quality index has been decreased and significantly reached to lower level for breathing. For instance- Due to the large number of industries in Delhi, Air quality index has reached to 456 which signifies that air is impure and it is harmful for people.
In conclusion, having discussed the above viewpoints in detail, I am inclined to believe that even though industries worsen the quality of air and cause certain health issues but they act as boon for unemployed people.The regime can help in curbing the Industrial drawbacks by imposing stringent rules and guidelines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42605633803 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07422195149 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4692702232 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229831285025 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829252472172 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961933251031 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144448927668 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108483183548 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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