The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

The bar chart illustrates a breakdown of information with regard to the proportion of people in England who donate their money in social program. There are five different age groups that get involved in charity from 1990 to 2010. It is measured in percentage.

Overall, what stands out from the chart examines that people in the 36-50 age group recorded the highest percentage while young people, 18-25 years old, had negatively correlated figure. A striking point is that the proportion of donators from three different age groups had a downward trend in the end of the period although the proport...

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