You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
Dear Simon,
My name is Paul. I obtained your name and address online on this website: penpals.com. I would be glad to have this chance to write and become a pen pal with you.
Firstly, I would like to introduce myself and let you know about my background. I am 24 years old guy from Italy. I have studied Machine Tool Operator for 3 years at Giuseppe Zanardelli school in Verolanuova, Brescia. I have had also some work experiences as machine tool operator in few well know firm as Metal S.n.c and Arcelor S.r.l.. Currently, I am studying for CNC Machine Operator at ITIS school in Brescia. I would like to devolp my study knowledge in mechanical field. My hobbies are play football and hang out with my friends when I am free. Also, I really enjoy reading books expeccially the horrors.
I am coming to England in your country next month, on my holidays. Therefore, I would appriciate if we could meet and spend some time toghether. Please let me know what you think.
Hoping to hear back from you soon,
Paul
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I am 24 years old guy from Italy
I am a 24 years old guy from Italy
Sentence: I would like to devolp my study knowledge in mechanical field.
Error: devolp Suggestion: develop
Sentence: Also, I really enjoy reading books expeccially the horrors.
Error: expeccially Suggestion: especially
Sentence: Therefore, I would appriciate if we could meet and spend some time toghether.
Error: appriciate Suggestion: appreciate
Error: toghether Suggestion: together
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 187 200
No. of Characters: 797 1000
No. of Different Words: 126 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.698 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.262 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.467 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.221 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.267 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.598 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.183 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4