Life is no better than it was hundred years ago. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons according to your knowledge
No doubt , Humans' life has undergone a tremendous change over decades. While a debate has been surfacing had the bygone era promised a satisfactory living or life is ameliorated nowadays? From my view points, later view hold valid grounds and the reason for my inclination are articulated in the ensuring paragraphs.
To embark on, since the inception of laboratory, achievements in medical science were affects the life immensely. The lethal diseases of past such as malaria, skin cancer or now curable, which not only reflects a boon for scientists, but proliferate the life expectancy as well. In contrast, a century ago several ailments had been the global plight. Another considered aspect might be technology revolution. To be more precise, electronic gadgets such as laptops, smartphones and routers have Drastically increases worker productivity,Which in turn is making people satisfied. Besides it, interaction we distance people Become feasible because of wireless communication.
Most importantly, modern world creates immense opportunities for toilers to get hands-on in different ffields; however, this was not the case in early 90s Weird people or abide by limited business opportunities.Currently, enhancement in medical field, birth of artificial intelligence and prevading globalisation have enhanced quality of life, undoubtedly.
However, the occurrence of several unprecedented situations cannot be overlooked that were brought by current world. Denizens are confronting issues of sever bond with friends and family as a result of involvement in rat race In lieu of which nothing is being done to foster relationship, instead they are becoming money minded. Secondly, sedentary lifestyle adverses the case Significantly, whereas in past mechanical jobs were keeping individuals fit as fiddle.
Conclusively, I would content that busy pace is major threat of degrading living standards.
However, the advantages that modern world brings has turned our life much easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76013513514 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33465266548 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716216216216 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7185136139 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696854523593 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214985921135 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237296231475 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0317209892737 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260139877705 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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