In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that can be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Nowadays, with the fast paced development of medical treatment and life quality, the lifespan of humans in the developed world is expanding. As a result, both individuals and society are facing many negative effects. there are some solutions that can be brought into use in order to diminish the problems.
The increase in average life expectancy means that there are more elderlies and fewer young. The foremost problem is the downturn in economics because of the lack of labour force. it is impossible for companies to operate effectively with the insufficiency of employees. Besides, the higher rate of ageing populations is, the heavier burden on nursing service is. Since young people work hard under a huge workload, they have no time to take care of their parents. Therefore, more and more people stay at nursing centres in their old ages. many resources are accumulated to focus on nursing service instead of other sectors.
Based on the mentioned issues, the government could take into consideration some measures. In the short term, increasing the age of retirement is essential. As the medical treatment and life quality are improved, people have better health and conditions to endure their working age. In the long term, the government should pay attention to the maternity policy for women which includes financial support, high-quality health care without fees, longer maternity paid leave, and career support after maternity leave. This action will stimulate women to have more offspring. These days, many young women are under pressure from work which leads to an unbalance in their life. In consequence, they are likely to not get married or have children because they are afraid of getting more tension.
In conclusion, ageing populations is a concerning issue worldwide, but there are a variety of means that are potential to control it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6937685292 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0515001894 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193632403652 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054708082902 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452640252992 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109758982919 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476836080138 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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