It is more important for children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Yes, i do agree with the writer statment, because many of the childrens want to learn local type of the history.
The number of the students are found in our country which do want to learn local type of the history. However very small number of the students don't want to read the local news paperin our country. Here is two type of the student some want to read and other don't want to read it.Both of the points i will discuss in my own points.
Frist of all, large number of the student who want to read more about our local time which is related about our country. they also plane to study our city or country so they read intrestedly and their feel too much high due to local news. such as . A person who live in China and he want to read about his country and it's family so he feel very well about his family eventhough his family don't care which is related about them.
Secondly, the other type of the students who don't want to read local news paper and their desire to learn about the foreign country because he want to learn some international country so i like to prefer some national and the inter of them. which will gift for them. such as few number of the studens want to leatn only the abopic
Conclusion. we should learn both type of the topic. Then we will be more about the scocietd and some must learn about the our country and some of the othe.
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... the scocietd and some must learn about the our country and some of the othe.
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...me must learn about the our country and some of the othe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2337164751 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94370767705 2.80592935109 69% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429118773946 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4091220856 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0833333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143790194477 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634796040805 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535617925282 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106328512498 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435200752173 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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