The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day.
The two maps below demonstrate how a particular area has transformed from 1965 to now. Overall, it is easy to see that this area has been urbanized to become a far more modern city over this period.
Looking at the changes in more detail, the most significant change of this area is the construction of a road bridge, which replaces the old ferry. While in 1965, it was impossible to pass through the river by walking, now, a road bridge leading the way to the city has been erected over the river. To the north of this road, the forests were completely cut down for the introduce of a new car park. Besides, there is a footbridge which is located in front of a second car park runs parallel to the road bridge.
The two maps also illustrate some developments in residential area. In 1965, there were only four houses on the top right-hand side of this particular area. However, in recent days, not only much more houses but also some new apartments have been built in this area. Houses located on both sides of the main road and even alongside the road bridge. A third car park is constructed in the heart of new housing area, which accesses residents here to the main road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he forests were completely cut down for the introduce of a new car park. Besides, there is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48837209302 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4356021685 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562790697674 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5508411598 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144281033322 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661705193494 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730016753914 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112870568042 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569664903877 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.