Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. Do you think is this a positive or negative trend?
These days, more and more countries decide to import a barrage of food from other nations in the world. In my opinion, in spite of a minor advantages, particular more products and cheaper prices, I hold a belief that this trend has negative impact on these continents, which are about economy and health.
In the one hand, it is understandable why international importation has been increasingly popular among some nations around the world with many benefits. The first benefit is to get wider variety of food in domestic market. As a result, some fruits and vegetables can only be grown in specific regions. For instance, Cherries are cultivated in South America but Vietnamese people can still enjoy this fresh fruit, thanks to importing. Moreover, the competition of prices between domestic and global production can be extremely fierce. Therefore, buyers may have more options for one item because of the comparison with quality, models and product price.
Nevertheless, in my perspective, the major drawbacks outweigh the advantages including: economy and health. First, the subsequent loss of subsistence farming capacity could lead to import an array of food from global market. If farmers can not maintain agricultural land for cultivating and harvesting, the supply of food product from domestic market can be replaced completely by other countries. The international commerce of this nation will bring a gap from agriculture. Second, imported food is not frequently healthy. As those food materials have to be transported over long distances, they are preserved with the immense support of chemicals to sustain the best quality. Some scientists assumed that compounds from this preservation are able to result in cancer.
In conclusion, although importing food from other countries bring many benefits and should not be disregarded, I still convinced that this trend has more detrimental impacts.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38795986622 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93265079935 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5112465935 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259773759788 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836534615514 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710291950319 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17783686952 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589275011776 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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