commonly, nowadays, yougsters experience peer pressure from their agemates that effects their attitudes and circumstances. And, there are eqaul numbers og merits and demerits.
Considering the self-confidence that get boosted up in youngone's by encouragement from fellows. As an instance, in schools, various types of events such as sports, singing and debate are organised. In which some students feel reluctant to participate, but motivation by peers help them to show their talent, by which they begin to believe on themselves and their abilities. Apart from this, peer pressure can also lead to career prospects for few people. To explain it, generally certain students are weak in academics, and they give up their hope of improvement.
meanwhile, when their friends put pressure on them to do hard work and aid them to understand topics, may help them to obtain good scores. Which means they become eligible for qualified jobs.
Despite above mentioned positives, peer pressure affects adversly too. The main drawback is that youth may be misguided, as they can be involved in wrong society. For example, it is oftenly seen that most of the teens become drug addicted because their friends force them to do it on the sake of friendship. Hence, they start to spoil themselves and their families. Even, young individuals opt negative attitude. As sometimes, from their social circle, rich peers push them to buy luxuries items that they also want, due to vulnerable nature, they get manipulated easily. Which leads them to demand such things from their parents who cannot afford. Consequently, when care takers deny, they show temper and insistence.
In conclusion, though peer pressure has some beneficial impacts in youngsters, but it's negative side cannnot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31802120141 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76499452456 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7200539387 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6111111111 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208956702182 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627874148566 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629996764744 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126793551443 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275865334311 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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