Writing a letter for old friend
567 Le Duan ST
Buon Me Thuot city, Viet Nam
September, 22nd,2021
Dear Huong Giang!
How are you? I hope you are doing well! I am good. It’s been a while that we have written to each other. Just writing to know how about of you during this Covid -19 lock down.
It’s been a long time that we have seen each other, almost than two months. The schools, the markets, the salons …are closed. Initially, I really used to get bored by being at home and just bashed that why this Corona virus happened making us sit as home. My parents helped me to get over this boredom and use this time of being at home to learn new things. Now, I spend time being engaged in activities such as painting, crafting. I have even worked on improving English language. So I am really enjoying this look down period. I hope you will too!
Hoping to receive letters from you soon. Pay me regards to uncle Minh and aunt Lan. Greetings and blessing from my parents to you.
Love ,
Hoai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
...am good. It’s been a while that we have write to each other. Just writing to know how...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d blessing from my parents to you. Love , Hoai
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44134078212 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12889931495 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709497206704 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5147914833 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.7857142857 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.047522985759 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0154640422176 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313882394398 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0264074257892 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033841492512 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.0946893788 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 50.2224549098 169% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 11.3001002004 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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