Nowadays, due to shortage of jobs it quite tough to make money so that many individual opine that earning lots of money it biggest accomplishment while other deem that contributing as a society servant like, scientists, teachers, doctor, are most notably along with more success. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, indeed it is true that money plays indispensable role in living a comfy life along with the the power of money individual can easily solve any major concern with the help of money because in this present time individual can buy any stuffs with assist to spent a luxury life a good illustration of this is as we can see that the monthly expenditure bill are increasing day by day if individual aim to fulfil all there needs a good source of income otherwise in this modern era it really become quite hard to live without the power of money for instance look at, Mukesh Ambani he manage the GDP of India with the help of lots of money.
On the other hand, in this modern era the countries like, USA, China, Japan, and many other are rising day by day in field of technology and the only reasons behind this is the citizens of these are giving more priority to social services with assist to clime the development of nation as well as with the help of social contribution in field of education it looks more impactful in the reduction of crime due to awareness because the people of these countries focusing more along with encouraging their youth to put valuable contribution in their society by doing social work.
In conclusion, it is true that money plays crucial role in survival but it not means that individual totally neglect his role towards their nation and society both makes individual success but I reckon contributing as a society servant makes feel individual more proud because they helping in development of their nation by doing social service.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the biggest'.
Suggestion: it the biggest
...vidual opine that earning lots of money it biggest accomplishment while other deem that co...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... role in living a comfy life along with the the power of money individual can easily so...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... role in living a comfy life along with the the power of money individual can easily so...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we can see that the monthly expenditure bill are increasing day by day if indiv...
^^
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n see that the monthly expenditure bill are increasing day by day if individual ...
^^
Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... otherwise in this modern era it really become quite hard to live without the power of...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'manages'.
Suggestion: manages
... for instance look at, Mukesh Ambani he manage the GDP of India with the help of lots ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rising day by day in field of technology and the only reasons behind this is the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73607038123 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52717533665 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.436557963 49.4020404114 410% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.0 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.2 20.7667163134 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.0 7.06120827912 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190648783538 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112442739961 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861881665077 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130677238 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059581235956 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.4 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the biggest'.
Suggestion: it the biggest
...vidual opine that earning lots of money it biggest accomplishment while other deem that co...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... role in living a comfy life along with the the power of money individual can easily so...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... role in living a comfy life along with the the power of money individual can easily so...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we can see that the monthly expenditure bill are increasing day by day if indiv...
^^
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n see that the monthly expenditure bill are increasing day by day if individual ...
^^
Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... otherwise in this modern era it really become quite hard to live without the power of...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'manages'.
Suggestion: manages
... for instance look at, Mukesh Ambani he manage the GDP of India with the help of lots ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rising day by day in field of technology and the only reasons behind this is the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73607038123 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52717533665 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.436557963 49.4020404114 410% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.0 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.2 20.7667163134 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.0 7.06120827912 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190648783538 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112442739961 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861881665077 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130677238 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059581235956 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.4 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.