Someone I admire
Someone I admire
In this life, everyone has someone to admire. Young individuals have favorite celebrities or idols. Parents, grandparents, and close friends are all excellent role models. As for me, besides my parents, I also admire the person who taught me in middle school. That is my teacher, Ngoc. She was my homeroom teacher . I have great memories of her that I still remember.
She was a new teacher at the time. She looks so youthfully that I want to call her sister. She has a petite figure and very pretty face. I can not argue with her personality Those are the things that I admire so much.She is friendly, sociable but she is also very serious. She will not favor anyone.In addition, she is willing to confide when students have problems. Sometimes she is very funny. Those are just her small virtues and what I admire most about her is her dedication to education. She always prepares her lessons very carefully when she comes to class. She stays up late to prepare lectures and researches effective teaching methods to keep their sessions lively. She cares about all the students in her class. I really admire her efforts. She does not give up when there are difficulties and she is always serious to get the job done.
I have not seen her for a long time but I will still miss her. She is a person whom I admire. Her good qualities I will always preserve and promote.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, really, so, still, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58232931727 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48535228891 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.604172422 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.8636363636 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3181818182 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139682928865 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050754444146 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130015236327 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651480438284 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534767965346 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.1 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.