Nowadays technology increase day by day in all over the word such as computer, mobiles as well as robots so on. Machines plays crucial role in everyone life but there are some merits and demerits also. In present advantage has outweigh the disadvantages.
To commence with, modern technology has inclined at present. firstly
Machine makes easier life of human because today's everyone has busy schedule their has no enough time for go to market for shopping. Secondly, during of pandemic technology plays vital role for single person because masses purchase basic needs from online.
Moreover, there are some demerits of modern technology. Firstly, human totally depend upon gadgets like cell phone and people become lazy also. For instance, masses ignore
Go outside and everything order from internet. Majority of people prefer to online shopping nowadays. Secondly, children ignore their study because of online gaming and social media so on. For instance, during covid period every school has given online classes consequences parents provides cell phone for their children then they are totally depend on it.
To sum up, although gadgets have some demerits but without this life are impossible because it makes easier and happier life of human.
- When families have a meal together it is considered social activity What are the advances of a family meal Do you think eating together is important to people in your country 84
- The use of mobile phones should be banned in public spaces such as libraries transportation and shops To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country What are reasons Solutions to change negative attitudes 61
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 78
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
...adays technology increase day by day in all over the word such as computer, mobiles as well as ro...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... but there are some merits and demerits also. In present advantage has outweigh the ...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...demerits also. In present advantage has outweigh the disadvantages. To commence with,...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...ern technology has inclined at present. firstly Machine makes easier life of human be...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hnology has inclined at present. firstly Machine makes easier life of human becau...
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Line 6, column 139, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... like cell phone and people become lazy also. For instance, masses ignore Go outsi...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e lazy also. For instance, masses ignore Go outside and everything order from int...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...or their children then they are totally depend on it. To sum up, although gadgets ...
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it. To sum up, although gadgets have some demerits but without this life are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37878787879 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37685696579 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0871725641 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696633550126 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246606606035 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287077176072 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.035485355258 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363604448717 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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