Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Whether people work from home or must go to the outside has raged unabated over the last dew decades primarily because the development of technology. This writer strongly assert that working from home is a state-of-the-art idea.
on the one hand, there are those who contend that working at home does not help people to be exposed to the practical experience and it is almost make people easily absorbed into the deep depression and quit their working process fast. In addition to, many think that facing with the computer whole day will have a detrimental effect on their eyes.
On the another hand, an array of people who tend to the opinion that doing the deadline or tasks on the computer or any types of technology is the most brilliant and convenient way. Furthermore, using cutting-edge technology will help adults or kids can broaden their horizon by searching a large number of information to get a world of knowledges. Last but not least, the technology in this era is getting more cheaper, thus; many are prone to think that using top-notch technology to work from hone is dedicated to making a great contribution to get more useful and comfortable than go outside for their jobs.
To sum up, there are a vast number of people who think that working from home is not suitable. This opposite holds the true that using internet to study or work at home is a way must be encouraged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... from home is a state-of-the-art idea. on the one hand, there are those who conte...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...e practical experience and it is almost make people easily absorbed into the deep de...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... can broaden their horizon by searching a large number of information to get a world of knowledge...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
..., the technology in this era is getting more cheaper, thus; many are prone to think that usi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, thus, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7131147541 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62735286345 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5177251863 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.777777778 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29118164446 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118859738836 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065407169906 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174938457604 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579465490939 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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