It is true that children in today's society have to deal with too many pressures regarding educational, social, and commercial. The following essay discusses the associated problems that arise with this trend and possible solutions to alleviate any serious impacts it is causing
On the one hand, there are several reasons why most of the youth have been living under tremendous stress due to the higher study and career development. One of the obvious reasons is the over-requirements from teachers. These days, children are forced to reach higher academic results in school by their teachers; therefore the study environment is becoming more competitive and challenging. At the same, children also get more pressure from their own parents. There are a lot of parents who is the closest person to their children but also the ones who always put an invisible and high expectation on them. This means the children have to exert themselves to perform best in academic and social aspects to please their parents. Last but not least, the increase in advertisements targeting children are also a serious reason of this issue. This is because nowadays more and more companies aim to target children just because of their purpose in maximize sales.
However, there are several solutions that can be implemented in order to help deal with such issues. The first solution would be school managers should change the educational systems into an open and creative environment to the student. As a result, children can have more opportunities to gain a deeper understanding in school, Another feasible solution is that parents should spend more time with their kids to understand more about them. This can be done by attending to the children's emotions and feelings; hence parents would reduce their expectations on children. Thirdly, the government also have to control all the advertisements of companies taht target children with bad purpose by creating a law that forbids unsuitable ads and monitors it before posting on social media sites.
In conclusion, although stress taken by youth is becoming a serious issue nowadays, there are several solutions that can be implemented to reduce the impacts that this trend is having on society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, regarding, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18282548476 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78534025455 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523545706371 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6452709524 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.733333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209996379203 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764491447936 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411803477224 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124837999533 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294652147187 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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