Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
It is true that consumers are being bombarded with advertisements from competing businesses. Although there might be some negative impacts on buyers, there are a number of practical measures that governments and individuals may employ to tackle this issue.
On the one hand, there are several certain problems that consumers are faced with advertisements. The first one is that people are often persuaded to follow the latest trends that they do not really need. The images of celebrities are used in many commercials, especially cosmetics, to encourage customers to purchase the new versions that are being advertised. However, most of those products are of little use to buyers. This could be seen as a waste of money. The second one is that children and young people may easily be influenced by adverts . They put pressure on their parents to buy things such as fast foods and junk foods that may not be good for their health. This may cause conflicts between family members if parents deny their children something they want to buy.
On the other hand, several solutions could be taken by individuals and the government to address these issues. Firstly, individuals should become wise buyers. They should take their needs into account before buying something to avoid wasting money. Secondly, the government should control or even ban adverts aimed at children with unhealthy products that can be a risk to health should display warnings.
In conclusion, there are various negative effects on purchasers, referring to buying unnecessary things and causing a bad connection between parents and children. However, appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these issues not only by individuals but also governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24548736462 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7460654059 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5965423942 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159475238143 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561915045294 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810474164 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106700036578 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813140161498 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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