Education is the key point which can lead people to become more successful in life. Following this, few members of society a Convinced by discrete school for boys and girls for better result. But the other part of the community has the opposite opinion. However, I agree to the statement that young students should be educated in mixed school rather than sending them into two separate schools.
Firstly, there are many reason to send child in co-educational school in which there will be no gender discrimination. The advantage of that will be, they will receive equal opportunity and moreover, they can get better opportunity to know each other. So, in co-operate environment, there will be no
any uncomfortable dealing between them. Therefore, there will be very ease of work between each other without any hesitation and dispute. In particular,
the most developed country Japan, having only mixed school as a result youngster of that country are more fortunate than other parts of world.
On the other hand, the reason why many people think one gender school are more beneficial for students is because they are more focused in to study without emotional distraction towards opposite gender. Beside that parents of female student are more conscious about the safety of their child so they prefer girls school. Hence, they can study peacefully. In that case Rajasthan éducation department support gender biased school to give better education to individual.
Hence, In the conclusion. I have stated both views on different education patterns. However, I would prefer a coed school for boys and girls for better result rather
then gender-biased school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...separate schools. Firstly, there are many reason to send child in co-educational school ...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... no gender discrimination. The advantage of that will be, they will receive equal...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...n co-operate environment, there will be no any uncomfortable dealing between them...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...oys and girls for better result rather then gender-biased school.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23507462687 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67760476463 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1516827964 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308661696668 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932250495123 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646859067075 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142922671528 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871610462068 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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