Dear Jackson,
How are you? hope you are well.What about your business "Travel Agency", I hope everything is going great. I am on a holiday with my friends.
I am in "Goa" city and at present, I am at "calangut beach" which is near to my guesthouse, which is at a walkable distance their I went there to relax because I was tired from the "Two-days" journey, it was great by being there at the beach. The Next day we have planned for going to the other beach know as "Sekwarium beach" it was far away from the place where we have stayed in the hotel, it was 2km away. But, at the beach, we all have really enjoyed quality time with my friends. such as "Water sports" like a Jet ride, Banana ride, Paragliding and etc., we have spent a full day and at the night we went to "Pub" there we have a dance with my friends.
And thanks for your opinion, which you told us to go to the place. I miss you too for making us an unforgettable journey and lifetime golden memories.
thanking you,
Yours Lovingly,
Prem.
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- You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent and you are having a wonderful time You promise to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion Write a letter to your travel agent as promised and let him know w
- New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 67
- Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays many children are using cellphones and mobile phones Many say it is good Some say it is bad What is your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Jackson, How are you? hope you are well.What about your business &...
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Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
...ackson, How are you? hope you are well.What about your business 'Travel Agency...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...y enjoyed quality time with my friends. such as 'Water sports' like a Jet ...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ke a Jet ride, Banana ride, Paragliding and etc., we have spent a full day and at the ni...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
... journey and lifetime golden memories. thanking you, Yours Lovingly, Prem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64583333333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16447292434 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8989596809 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12602420639 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872624193904 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675438527362 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125842850783 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705894583911 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.