The crime rate has inclined to a peak level these days as compared with the olden days. In the olden days, people were very cautious about their moral values, as a result, there were very few crimes that happened.In this essay, I am going to discuss some effective measures against crime and even my opinion regarding this issue.
Most often the crimes are related to the consumption of alcohol, obviously, this is the main cause for the crimes to be happening around us. Because people, when consuming alcohol, are more prone to commit such crimes which lead to serious consequences. To deduct such crimes the preliminary step is to ban alcohol, along this many other actions should also need to be taken into the consideration, like charging penalties to the people for alcohol consumption, strict rules should be followed against such people, many more.
according to me banning alcohol is considered an effective measure against crime reduction.When an individual is strictly restricted to consume alcohol this will also be very helpful for even his health. this reduces the usage of alcohol in people results in fewer crimes related to consuming alcohol.
To sum up, according to my opinion there should be many other actions that need to be taken against the crimes that have been done around us. The people who commit a should punished in a strict way such that the other people thinking about the crime should get afraid of doing it. In the conclusion, i would like to suggest to the governments of our country to prepare an unfeasible rule for the criminals,so that the people in the country could really celebrate the indipendency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, regarding, so, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96028880866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59483675934 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527075812274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1733892894 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.4 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434609853246 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181988135329 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816755292084 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261844403081 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595311216139 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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