Respected Sir/Madam,
I am john, Ist year student at your college, my room Number is 420, I and my roommate are facing difficulties at the room, I request to kindly resolve the issues. so, as to do my work smoothly.
As it is informed to you that, I am facing problems like water, network issues. The water is the basic need of every person, the water supply is not clean and are some smells from it. As, I am a first-year student I need to search on many websites and it is becoming very difficult with the Wi-Fi.
The water here is not clean such that dust particles and there are some bad smells from the water. so, that is the reason I got ill and visited many times hospital and Doctor advice me to drink clean water. As I am working on a project I need a fast/speed network.
In this regard, I request you to kindly give me these facilities. so, as to do my work softly and clearly.
Thanking you sir/madam,
Yours Faithfully,
john, First year, CSE.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...I request to kindly resolve the issues. so, as to do my work smoothly. As it is i...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “so , as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I request to kindly resolve the issues. so, as to do my work smoothly. As it is infor...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ere are some bad smells from the water. so, that is the reason I got ill and visit...
^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...s the reason I got ill and visited many times hospital and Doctor advice me to drink ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... Doctor advice me to drink clean water. As I am working on a project I need a fast...
^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...you to kindly give me these facilities. so, as to do my work softly and clearly. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35555555556 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42454017532 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2192275376 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154615657581 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605993351884 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03895067416 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699452212534 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055850552086 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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