Both the passage and lecture talks about authenticity of European silver coin dated thousand years ago. The former asserts that the coin is fake while, the latter contradicts each of it's points. The arguments are as follows:
Firstly, The passage tells that Norse settlement site and the place where coin is found are distinctly located. The reading contradicts that as many objects founded at the archaeological site come from very far places as Norse travelled largely across North America.
Furthermore, The author of the passage belives that no other coins were found at the Norse Canadian settlement. The lecturer counters that by asserting when norse were planning to move to North America they must have taken there valuables to America, but, while returning back to europe they take all the coins leaving no other coins to be discovered at the archaelogical site.
Finally, The author posits that native american do not consider silver coin as money and it is of no use for them. The lecturer challenges this argument by professing, Native americans have an interest for unique items and they find them attractive. The norse must have traded sliver coin with Native Americans as it can be used in necklaces and in several different ornaments.
To sum up, both the writer and lecturer hold conflicting views about the authenticity of silver coins found at Maine,USA.It's clear that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e coin is found are distinctly located. The reading contradicts that as many object...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
... there valuables to America, but, while returning back to europe they take all the coins leavi...
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Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...s as it can be used in necklaces and in several different ornaments. To sum up, both the writer ...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , USA
...henticity of silver coins found at Maine,USA.Its clear that they will have trouble f...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
...city of silver coins found at Maine,USA.Its clear that they will have trouble findi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, then, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 238.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10084033613 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60971389152 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3137911745 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240014134383 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988071387468 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040441333442 0.0662205650399 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128629587448 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307927717583 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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