Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
In recent years, the technology has been changed human lives however due this people do not have time to any other kind of extra activities while earlier people have much time to do it. In the course of the essay, I will describe reasons and the effect on the society.
Firstly, most of the time peolpe spend on the workplaces and doing extra work to improve theri skills and contribute in organisation progress. However these days people do not have enough money to spend on their hobbies. For example, a person working in commpany from morning to evening, and after his he has only limmited time which he spend with their family and friends, although these hobbies also demand of money. Most of the middle class would not have extra money if they spend on hobbies then their faimaly finance will disturb. In addition, people like to spend their time the internet.
On the other hand, the decrease in the hobbies which effect on the communities and on a person life. Many kind of extra activities makes contribution socitey and on those people who leave their hobbies. For instance, in city most people do gardening in there free time and plant tress which contribute to reduce climate problems if people leave thier activities then the tree growth will reduce. similarly, a person who spend time on book reading if he leave then his general level will decrese.
In conclusion, people change their way of living and they spend most of the time on jobs however people not spend time on activities this ternd creates effect on his person lif and on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogy has been changed human lives however due this people do not have time to any ...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s been changed human lives however due this people do not have time to any other ki...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nd contribute in organisation progress. However these days people do not have enough mo...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... his he has only limmited time which he spend with their family and friends, although...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many kinds'.
Suggestion: Many kinds
...n the communities and on a person life. Many kind of extra activities makes contribution ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e climate problems if people leave thier activities then the tree growth will red...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Similarly
...ities then the tree growth will reduce. similarly, a person who spend time on book readin...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leaves'.
Suggestion: leaves
...on who spend time on book reading if he leave then his general level will decrese. ...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffect on his person lif and on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27811870345 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1508449119 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164718474042 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693360478984 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435970312269 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124057095968 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381949454987 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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