The bar chart demonstrates how many hours of leisure enjoyed in a typical week between 1998 and 1999, according to gender and employment status.
As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evident that most of men had more leisure time than women. Moreover, employers had less freetime than unemployed and retired people.
Employed men with full time spent over 40 hours while women just enjoyed slightly below 40 hours. Additionally, the leisure time of unemployed and retired people were double as much as the figure for employees with full time and part time. Unemployed and retired men had approximately 85 hours for relaxing whereas women took about 79 hours a week.
There are no data about employed men with part time and home staying husbands illustrated in the chart. Part-time employed women had less sparetime than women who stay at home doing housework. Housewives spent 50 hours while employed women with part time just had 40 hours weekly. Full-time employers had the least time for relaxing. In contrast, jobless men had the most time in 5 catogories.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: NganKim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the men') or simply say ''most men''.
Suggestion: most of the men; most men
...m the graph, it is clearly evident that most of men had more leisure time than women. Moreo...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... and retired people. Employed men with full time spent over 40 hours while women just en...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...s much as the figure for employees with full time and part time. Unemployed and retired m...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...figure for employees with full time and part time. Unemployed and retired men had approxi...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ere are no data about employed men with part time and home staying husbands illustrated i...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...pent 50 hours while employed women with part time just had 40 hours weekly. Full-time emp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5087747243 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8810934488 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266769225728 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118803771153 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438583760841 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16696531004 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416593114454 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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