It is an undeniable fact that today's, every individual living hectic life style. Thus, they obviously need relaxation. However, some scholar's have an argument that people do those activities which are helpful to enhance their mental skills. Though, other against in and believe they should take rest.
There is denying the fact that nowadays free time plays an important in one's life. According to me, masses should spend time according to their own need. For instance, pupils; who spend their whole day on books. First they spend time in their school and attend extra classes. So, it is grievance when they spend their leisure time with reading book on by solving puzzles to improve the mind. This will create negative on their body and mind also.
On the contrary side, some masses opine that it is essential to devote free time in those activities that enhance the brain skills. Let us considered as an example of tutor's. Those teachers who teach technical subjects they are spending their extra time with book. It is therefore, they require more time to deal with particular subjects such as Mathematics and Physics; they do practice in their free time and then they give their best while teaching in the classroom. However, a recent report of " Time of India" newspaper has proven that mostly tutor's do practice in their free time.
Put two and two together, after accessing on this notion. I must assert that the leisure time is precious treasure. And, masses should spend it according to their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...believe they should take rest. There is denying the fact that nowadays free time plays ...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...owadays free time plays an important in ones life. According to me, masses should sp...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...e time plays an important in ones life. According to me, masses should spend time according to ...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... create negative on their body and mind also. On the contrary side, some masses o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9609375 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30667287366 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8790749092 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5555555556 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122925193296 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416747302587 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028049243261 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808308582921 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264854569617 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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