The given tables depicts the information about the maximum and the minimum temperatures along with the time of sunrise and sunset in two different places namely London and Sydney from 28th to 30th December 2018.
As is observed in the tables, on the first day the highest temperature was merely 9 °C in London while it was 26 °C for Sydney. Also, the lowest temperature was 4 °C and 17ﾟC in the UK and Australia respectively. The climate in London heated up and reached 13 °C as maximum 3 °C as minimum. The temperature noticed in Sydney was about 2 °C more from previous day as the topmost and at bottom. In last, 10 °C was the maximum and 5 °C was the minimum temperature in London however for Sydney it was 31 °C and 19 °C.
Moving forward, the sun rose at 8: 05 in London but about 2 hours earlier in Sydney on Friday. On the same day, the sunset was at 15: 57 in London and at 20: 06 in Sydney. The time of sunrise and sunset for both places showed insignificant difference the next two days and hovered about the same time as on the first day.
Overall, it is clear that the Sydney was hotter than compared to London in all the given time, and sun stayed more hours in Sydney.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38736313607 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5585269428 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288452881046 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124517694538 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676971911623 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190232390231 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560305385962 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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