The chart below shows the average hours spent per day in leisure and sports activities, by youngest and oldest populations, in the US, in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the bar chart contrasting the daily mean amount of time spent on 6 distinct activities between the 2 groups of residents whose age ranges were from 15 to 19 and upper 75 in the year 2015.
It is perceptible that the elderly preferred watching Tv, relaxing, and reading more than the young while the reverse was true for the rest. Moreover, watching Tv was by far the most predominant activity for either group.
When it comes to the leisure activities favored more by the above-75s, watching Tv accounted for 4,5 hours in one day, while 2,4 was the number recorded among the adolescent, nearly a half contrasting to the opposite age group. This was followed by 1 hour in reading and 0,6 in relaxing and thinking of the senior, which was 5 and 6 times higher than the young, respectively.
Conversely, there were competitive figures of hours in socializing and communicating when just 0,1-hour disproportion leaned towards the young with 0,8 hours. In the interim, the gap in average time dedicated to playing computer games and doing exercise or recreation was far bigger, with 1,1 and 0,6 hours for the 15 to 19-year-olds compared to 0,5 and 0,2 hours for those aged from 75 or so in turn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74761904762 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73783021492 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7990623191 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.428571429 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993740951153 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469199677556 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288354062558 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619957438585 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266375424462 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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