parents should give freedom to tackle children's problem by themselves
Well , it is universally acknowledge that today's children are the leaders of tomorrow .owing to this few proportion of masses assert that offspring must follow the rules and regulations which are made by their parents and teachers . However ,others ponder that parents should give freedom to tackle their problem by themselves. Now ,I am going to shed a light on both views with my own opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are mainfold points to support the former views. First and foremost , majority of parents want to impose rules and norms on their children related to behaviour . To justify , it is very fruitful for them to follow the rules as they can maintain the discipline as well as they come to know about the value of their elders and knows the importance of relationships . Moreover under the instruction of their guardian and mentor ,they can inculcate the various ethics , virtues ,and different moral values which help them to become a good person in their life . As a result , they will become the noble character of society . On the flip side , others have conflicting views.
Numerous points can be mentioned to shore up the later view . Initially , parents should give the freedom their offspring which effects the capabilities of children thinking . For example , if they have right to make their own decision than they can show their hidden talent in front of others . Consequently , in this way they can upsurge their intellectual power to make any type of decision . Furthermore ,nowadays , ample of child are living in a guided environment . To be specific , under the pressure of parents they will not indulge in a bad activity as well as they maintain their time in good way . Hence , in this way , they will totally depend on their parents for taking any step of their life .
From my notion , both aspects have their own significance . undeniably, under the instruction of parents it gives the fruitful result to them to get success in their life . However , I still firmly believe that children should have rights to make decision by themselves and think about their bright future and they will become independent and sociable person .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97777777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62331627852 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519444444444 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6453666151 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3157894737 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19559607909 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714551967736 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127060105774 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145031509009 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886466260327 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.