Many parents send their children abroad to study.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the phenomenon.
Nowadays, taking years out to study overseas is becoming increasingly popular. For many people, especially for youngsters, the chance to spend an extended period of time abroad is an attractive one. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also have some drawbacks to be considered.
On the one hand, there are tremendous advantages to studying abroad. One evident strength is that continuing study in a foreign country broadens childrens’ horizons. When parents send their children on trips abroad for educational purposes, it is not only an ideal period to meet people from other backgrounds but also time to immerse in different jobs. In other words, teenagers can learn how to cope with their own troubles themselves by experiencing the school of hard knocks. Furthermore, if students obtain an international degree, their career prospects will be improved. It seems to be obvious that qualifications from a prestigious university hold employers’ attention.
On the other hand, spending time studying overseas also has a number of disadvantages. Firstly, students almost have to learn everything from scratch. Not to mention the language barrier, they may find it challenging to overcome cultural shocks as well as to adapt with a new environment. A great deal of overseas students have been witnessed to be upset or even depressed after actually knowing that living in a abroad country is not such plain sailing. Besides, parents have to pay a huge amount of money for study fees and the cost of living. Even if their children win a scholarship, the cost is still unaffordable because of the disparity among countries. For instance, one year of study in Canada, including accommodation and tuition fees, costs over 2 thousand CAD per year.
To conclude, the idea of sending children overseas for better education puts them ahead of those studying in the local area; moreover, they can mature by getting far from the care of their guardians. However, the high cost and impact of cultural changes should be prior concerns.
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Suggestion: overcoming
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, as for, as to, for instance, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22356495468 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88789832515 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622356495468 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5576922469 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218272913444 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633027558874 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061705441064 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128480743679 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556108046733 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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