Despite the innovations made in agricultural field , a number of people in the world still starving and malnutrition . This essay will illustrate the key reasons behind of this issue and the solutions to deal with this problem.
Firstly , climate change is one of the most major reasons of world hunger . Although there are many advances in agriculture , food productions are seriously affected by the extreme weather like climate change , globe warming or natural disaster ,.. . People who in the region affected by environment impact , often suffer from food shortage and famine . Secondly , there are a lack of developed and advanced machine which solve the problems in agriculture in some undeveloped countries like Africa ,.. .Moreover , a number of economic crisis , political instability , civil war in many countries also impact on agricultural field . For example , these day in many countries , the problem of economic crisis because of the complicated disease , impact on many aspects of life , comprise of agricultural field which lead to world hunger .
To solve the issue of famine all around the world , the government need enact legislation to reduce impacts from human life to climate change which impact on agriculture .For example , the using of fertilizers and pesticides should be banned . Secondly , the government should invest in technology , and modern machines to improve agricultural field that can reduce the number of world hunger in some countries . Last but not least , the government have to deal deeply with problems about economic crisis , civil war in many countries .
In conclusion , the government have to solve many problems about environmental impact as well as wars and conflict to reduce the number of people who are starving and malnutrition all around the world
Firstly , climate change is one of the most major reasons of world hunger . Although there are many advances in agriculture , food productions are seriously affected by the extreme weather like climate change , globe warming or natural disaster ,.. . People who in the region affected by environment impact , often suffer from food shortage and famine . Secondly , there are a lack of developed and advanced machine which solve the problems in agriculture in some undeveloped countries like Africa ,.. .Moreover , a number of economic crisis , political instability , civil war in many countries also impact on agricultural field . For example , these day in many countries , the problem of economic crisis because of the complicated disease , impact on many aspects of life , comprise of agricultural field which lead to world hunger .
To solve the issue of famine all around the world , the government need enact legislation to reduce impacts from human life to climate change which impact on agriculture .For example , the using of fertilizers and pesticides should be banned . Secondly , the government should invest in technology , and modern machines to improve agricultural field that can reduce the number of world hunger in some countries . Last but not least , the government have to deal deeply with problems about economic crisis , civil war in many countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84172647613 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9666048962 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173255246222 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083659054434 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051102034505 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143512610134 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111789611536 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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