advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. some people say that advertising is a positive part of our life. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertisements are ubiquitous and inevitable for everyone in modern society. It is an issue of controversy over whether advertising exerts positive impacts on our life or not. While I contend that the benefits of advertisements are undeniable, I suppose that their downsides should not be ignored.
on the one hand, advertising can be seen as positive for both customers and companies. firstly, purchases may have difficulty in making appropriate shopping decisions in the absence of advertising. since that they can derive detailed and useful information about products from advertisements. Therefore, they will avoid dissipating their money for buying unnecessary stuff. secondly, advertising plays an integral role in promoting companies’ images. By dint of this, companies could be able to put their economic benefits to maximum.
On the other hand, some advertisements seem to be the culprit of adverse impacts on people’s life. one of the main downsides is that some advertisements may contain sex-arousing images. as a consequence, this will give rise to adverse impacts on children’s awareness if they get exposed to these advertisements. another drawback is that advertising companies are likely to exaggerate the quality of products. For instance, some pharmaceutical companies have a tendency to exaggerate their drugs, especially cancer ones, in advertisements, which may exert adverse impacts on consumers’ health or even death.
In conclusion, I subscribe to the opinion that everyone can derive manifold benefits from advertisements, although I believe that they could inflict some negative impacts on our life.
- advertising is all around us it is an unavoidable part of everyone s life some people say that advertising is a positive part of our life to what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- advertising is all around us it is an unavoidable part of everyone s life some people say that advertising is a positive part of our life to what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69387755102 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36784411914 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587755102041 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8184310097 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201618938604 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075166108422 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731465759678 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138273217783 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603069280353 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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