Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
climate transition preresent a major threat to life on Earth. Some people argued that we can seek an another solution to live with climate change phenomenon instead of preventing the variations of the climate. In my point of view i completely disagree with this opinion, i believe that we have time to tackle this issue and reduce the the impact of climate change.
The goverment and individual have responsibilitis to stop this phenomenon. In term of goverment, they could impose laws to limit carbon dioxide emissions which causes global warming or they could enact laws to severely punish individuals who pollute the enviroment such as littering or deforestion. moreover broadcashting every day about eniroment issue and an importance of enviroment to humnan life. For example, goverment could impose green taxes won driver, airplane, companies,.. and use the fine in renwewable energy resources from solar, wind or water power. In term of individuals, first of all every individual must be aware of protecting the enviroment and say no to enviroment pollution. In order to make it happen, it needs to be put into practice. we can use public transport or bicycles. conducting tree planting campaigns to reduce vacant land. moreover in every family should teach children knowledge about the enviroment and how to protect the enviroment that helps chidren have a sense of protecting the enviroment from a young.
There would be severe result if whe choose to live with climate change. The ice at the poles would melt quickly that leads to flood which is also causes of disease outbreaks accompanied by famine as well as homelessness and poverty. for instand people who are living in low-lying areas and do not have any safeguard could face problems lije flood or scarcity.
In conclution,i strongly disagree with living with climate change and preventing climate change is the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13961038961 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79874461352 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8053651173 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189395637533 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569174701524 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773103250592 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151803013182 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088436638327 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.