Many people enjoy travelling and experiencing other cultures. What are some of the beneficial effects of international travel on an individual?
Traveling is a hobby for many people. For each person, travel is an experience, an enjoyment, and a rest. Besides that, travelling always brings to us many positive effects, especially international travel. So, my following essay will mention the benefits of travelling abroad on an individual.
Firstly, each country has its own culture, so traveling abroad can help you learn many new things about the cultures of many different countries. For example, I was born and grew up in Vietnam. Vietnamese culture has a lot of special things that are different from other countries. So, when I travel to America, I may have a culture shock. One of the biggest differences is family life. In the USA, as soon as youngsters have their legal independence, they fly and go to college far away from their home. They live independently and do everything by themselves. They can make decisions without the help of their parents. However, in Vietnam, families stay as close to each other as possible. Family duty is no joke, and it’s our responsibility as a son or daughter to take care of our parents and elder family members. And when I have kids, they’ll take care of me. Therefore, travelling overseas can help us to learn about different cultures of different countries.
Secondly, you can make new friends and realize who your true friends are. When travelling abroad, you are in many ways more vulnerable than you are at home. You're in a foreign environment where you may be unaware of social conventions, practices, beliefs, or languages. So, many new relationships will be strengthened as a result of experiencing various scenarios together or separately. In addition, being away from home allows you to place a higher priority on your relationships. Some of your pals may not be as helpful or present as they were while you were at home. Friendships and ties with others may blossom. Distance has its own set of difficulties. At home, your relationships will be more complicated. You can't just go see that person whenever you want, much less chat to them whenever you want. Those friends, however, with whom you can connect as if there is no distance between you, will prove to be the most valuable.
In short, I think that international travel is really good for everyone. It can help us to learn new things in new countries and improve our relationships with other people. So, I hope that I will have many chances to travel overseas.
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besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88845497669 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8648960196 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.4666666667 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216755277993 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632709583296 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737637055 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168687428133 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966525829871 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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